I haven't read the whole thing, but I guarantee I'd have a red pen all over it. "Liquidated damages for any future violations" in the prayer? That one is a puzzle. Lines numbered 1-21 in the left margin instead of 1-28 and none of the text is lined up with those numbers. Sigh. Turns out one of the FL lawyers is barred in CA, so this must…
I haven't read the whole thing, but I guarantee I'd have a red pen all over it. "Liquidated damages for any future violations" in the prayer? That one is a puzzle. Lines numbered 1-21 in the left margin instead of 1-28 and none of the text is lined up with those numbers. Sigh. Turns out one of the FL lawyers is barred in CA, so this must be a draft we've been looking at with the blank line next to "Bar No." for him. I sure hope so. The final Complaint filed should look a whole lot better than this.
I haven't read the whole thing, but I guarantee I'd have a red pen all over it. "Liquidated damages for any future violations" in the prayer? That one is a puzzle. Lines numbered 1-21 in the left margin instead of 1-28 and none of the text is lined up with those numbers. Sigh. Turns out one of the FL lawyers is barred in CA, so this must be a draft we've been looking at with the blank line next to "Bar No." for him. I sure hope so. The final Complaint filed should look a whole lot better than this.
Thanks Debbie and Val... I'm learning by osmosis